散文我的書(shū)齋生活英譯賞析

時(shí)間：2024-08-23 05:48:39 英語(yǔ)筆譯

散文我的書(shū)齋生活英譯賞析

　　你們簡(jiǎn)直可以說(shuō)，洵美是生活在書(shū)齋里的：會(huì)客室里是書(shū)，臥房里是書(shū)，樓梯邊上也是書(shū)，連三層樓上的洗澡間里也是書(shū)。下面是小編分享的英譯散文《我的書(shū)齋生活》賞析，歡迎大家閱讀!

散文我的書(shū)齋生活英譯賞析

　　我的書(shū)齋生活

　　My Private Library

　　邵洵美

　　Shao Xunmei

　　你們簡(jiǎn)直可以說(shuō)，洵美是生活在書(shū)齋里的：會(huì)客室里是書(shū)，臥房里是書(shū)，樓梯邊上也是書(shū)，連三層樓上的洗澡間里也是書(shū)。所以一定要我指出哪一間是書(shū)齋，那可不容易。

　　You may as well call me a bookworm. I have books everywhere in my home – in the drawing room and the bedroom, on either side of the staircase, and even in the bathroom on the third floor. So it’s next to impossible for me to point out exactly where my study is.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，“簡(jiǎn)直可以說(shuō)”即“不妨說(shuō)”譯為may as well(做…倒也無(wú)妨)

　　2,“你們簡(jiǎn)直可以說(shuō)，洵美是生活在書(shū)齋里的”整句話理解為“你們不妨說(shuō)，詢美是個(gè)書(shū)蟲(chóng)”，譯為You may as well call me a bookworm. Bookworm指“在書(shū)齋埋頭學(xué)習(xí)的人”在此意為“生活在書(shū)齋的人”

　　3，it’s next to impossible譯為“…簡(jiǎn)直是不可能的”，Next to 在此意為“幾乎，近乎”

　　也許在我臥房隔壁的一間最像，中間有只書(shū)桌，可是書(shū)桌上又堆滿了書(shū)，沒(méi)有地方擺稿紙，也沒(méi)有地方擺硯臺(tái)，我又不會(huì)用鋼筆寫(xiě)文章。用鋼筆寫(xiě)，我總嫌太滑，太快;它幾乎不容你思想。我喜歡毛筆，它總伴著你，有時(shí)也許比你快一步，可是你總追得到。

　　Maybe it’s the room next to my bedroom. In the middle of it stands nothing but a desk piled high with lots of books so that there is practically no room for me to place my writing paper and the inkstone. The inkstone is indispensable to me because I always use a writing brush instead of a pen in doing my writing. I find the pen too slippery and moving a bit too fast, thus leaving little time for me to do more thinking. I prefer the writing brush because I can always keep pace with it. Though it sometimes may also move along a bit too fast, yet I can always catch up.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，“我又不會(huì)用鋼筆寫(xiě)文章”應(yīng)按“硯臺(tái)是我必須的，因?yàn)槲覍?xiě)文章只用毛筆，不會(huì)用鋼筆”理解，意譯為T(mén)he inkstone is indispensable to me because I always use a writing brush instead of a pen in doing my writing.

　　2，“它總伴著你”意即“它總和你思維的步調(diào)一致”譯為I can always keep pace with it

　　這個(gè)小房間里還有兩只安樂(lè)椅;一個(gè)書(shū)架，里面是我最心愛(ài)的書(shū)籍，不肯借人的。墻上只有一張水仙畫(huà)，淺淡的筆姿給你一種清高的空氣;偶然在看書(shū)的時(shí)候想到自己不久要窮得不成個(gè)樣子，它就會(huì)顯示給你一個(gè)最偉大的希望——所以有幾個(gè)晚上，我簡(jiǎn)直就呆對(duì)著這張畫(huà)。

　　There are only two armchairs in the room plus a bookcase holding my most favorite books, which are not to be borrowed by anybody. Hanging on the wall is a painting of narcissi done with light touches of ink imparting an air of moral superiority. Occasionally, while I am reading, I suddenly realize I’ll soon face penury. Then the painting will cheer me up with bright hopes. On several nights, I just sat in this room staring at it blankly.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，plus此處意為“外加”等于and

　　2，“淺淡的筆姿”即“淡淡的墨跡”，譯為light touches of ink

　　3，“清高”即“清白高潔”主要是道德上的操行清高，因此譯為moral superiority

　　4，“它就會(huì)顯示給你一個(gè)最偉大的希望”意即“它會(huì)讓你看到光明的未來(lái)并使你振作”，譯為T(mén)hen the painting will cheer me up with bright hopes

　　5，“我簡(jiǎn)直就呆對(duì)著這張畫(huà)”即“我就只是直直地盯著這幅畫(huà)”譯為I just sat in this room staring at it blankly.

　　這個(gè)小房間，長(zhǎng)不滿十五尺，寬不滿十尺，關(guān)于現(xiàn)代詩(shī)的書(shū)籍，我都放在里面：書(shū)架里放不下，便放在桌子上;桌子上放不下，便堆在椅子里;椅子里放不下，便疊在地上。理由是我從不整理我的書(shū)籍，買(mǎi)到了新書(shū)就隨便放，看過(guò)了又隨便丟;假使為了寫(xiě)一篇文章，需要參考時(shí)，每每費(fèi)半個(gè)一個(gè)鐘頭去尋覓。

　　The little room is about 5 meters in length and 3 meters in width. I keep all books on modern poetry there. Then the bookcase is full, I put them on the desk. Then the desk is full, I pile them up on the chairs. When the chairs are full, I pile them up on the floor. I never sort them out. I lay aside casually new acquisitions as well as books I’ve just finished reading. Consequently, it often takes me couple of hours to hunt down a book for reference when I am writing.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，“不滿”可按“大約，左右”來(lái)理解，譯為about

　　2,“長(zhǎng)不滿十五尺，寬不滿十尺” 譯為T(mén)he little room is about 5 meters in length and 3 meters in width三尺等于一米，因此15尺=5米，10尺=3米，單位換算也是翻譯的一個(gè)必備技能。此外，這個(gè)表示“長(zhǎng)…寬…”的固定句式也是需要記住的。

　　3，“書(shū)架里放不下，便放在桌子上;桌子上放不下，便堆在椅子里;椅子里放不下，便疊在地上。”原文句式相同，兩兩對(duì)仗，譯者亦采用結(jié)構(gòu)相同的英文來(lái)譯，最大限度地體現(xiàn)了原文的風(fēng)格。

　　4，“買(mǎi)到了新書(shū)就隨便放，看過(guò)了又隨便丟”譯為I lay aside casually new acquisitions as well as books I’ve just finished reading.其中把“隨便放”和“隨便丟”都譯為lay aside casually.此外，將“買(mǎi)到了新書(shū)新書(shū)”譯為new acquisitions(新獲得的事物)，這點(diǎn)我們之前也見(jiàn)過(guò)，在《虎》中，譯者將“后來(lái)父親房?jī)?nèi)多了一張虎皮椅墊“譯為From then on, my father had a new acquisition in his room—namely, the tiger-skin chair cushion,中a new acquisition較something new確切，前者能更加確切地表達(dá)”新增添的東西“

　　5，“hunt down a book for reference”即“找某本書(shū)作為參考” ,譯者將原句“需要參考時(shí)，每每費(fèi)半個(gè)一個(gè)鐘頭去尋覓(書(shū))”合譯為一句了。

　　通常一個(gè)人有了這許多放書(shū)的房間，他便總會(huì)為他們?nèi)≡S多雅致的名字：什么室，什么齋，什么樓之類(lèi)。一半當(dāng)然為了借這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)可以寫(xiě)些大字，叫做匾的人刻好了掛起來(lái);一半也是為自己或是家人找書(shū)的時(shí)候容易辨別。我卻懶得花這種心思，所以像上面所說(shuō)的那個(gè)房間，我們便叫作“樓上書(shū)房”。樓下的叫作“樓下書(shū)房”;三層樓的叫作“三層樓書(shū)房”。

　　Generally speaking, with so many rooms for storing books, one will assign to each an elegant name, to be inscribed on a horizontal board hung above the door, partly for show and partly for convenience. I, nevertheless, have never been in a mood for doing the same. I just call the above-mentioned room “Upstairs Study”, the room downstairs “Downstairs Study” and the bathroom on the third floor “Third-floor Study”.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，“給..起名”即assign names to

　　2，“一半當(dāng)然為了借這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)可以寫(xiě)些大字，叫做匾的人刻好了掛起來(lái);一半也是為自己或是家人找書(shū)的時(shí)候容易辨別。”即“一半為了裝飾，一般為了方便”，意譯為partly for show and partly for convenience

　　3，“我卻懶得花這種心思”意為“我卻無(wú)心這樣做”，意譯為I, nevertheless, have never been in a mood for doing the same.

　　我平時(shí)讀書(shū)寫(xiě)文章，都在夜間，所以坐在“樓上書(shū)房”的機(jī)會(huì)多，因?yàn)樗罱业呐P室，倦了，跨幾步便到床上。但是當(dāng)我準(zhǔn)備要全夜寫(xiě)文章的時(shí)候，便只能待在“樓下書(shū)房”了。那時(shí)候兩個(gè)大房間里只有我一個(gè)人，咳嗽，刮洋火，便不會(huì)鬧醒人家;天亮了，自己燉杯牛奶，或是走到對(duì)面弄堂里買(mǎi)些油豆腐，誰(shuí)都不會(huì)覺(jué) 得討厭。白天總是不在家的時(shí)候多，一回家便得尋了書(shū)讀;書(shū)拿到手，電話又來(lái)了。朋友又喜歡要我寫(xiě)文章，因?yàn)槲易蠲靼拙庉嫷耐纯啵ё治铱偪蠟樗s寫(xiě)。

　　Since I usually read and write at night, you’ll often find me sitting in the “Upstairs Study” because it is close to my bedroom. When I feel drowsy, I can easily reach my bed only a few steps away. But you’ll find me in the spacious “Downstairs Study” instead when I’m to spend the whole night writing. There I can cough or strike a match without disturbing my folks in their sleep. At daybreak, I will heat up milk for myself or walk to an alley on the opposite side of the street to buy some fried bean curd for breakfast – all done without making a nuisance of myself. I’m seldom at home in the daytime. But, I’ll start reading soon after I come back. Then I’ll be suddenly interrupted by phone calls from editor-friends asking for my contributions. They know that I, out of compassion for editors, will never decline to dash off an article of two to three thousand words.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，“所以坐在“樓上書(shū)房”的機(jī)會(huì)多”譯為you’ll often find me sitting in the “Upstairs Study”，這種譯法我們很難想到，采用第二人稱(chēng)可以拉近與讀者之間的距離，更加凸顯原作風(fēng)格

　　2，“洋火”即“火柴”，“刮洋火”即“打火柴”，因此譯為strike a match

　　3，“誰(shuí)都不會(huì)覺(jué)得討厭”即“也不會(huì)礙別人的事”或“也不會(huì)使自己成為礙事的人”，譯為all done without making a nuisance of myself.其中make A of B意為“使B成為A”

　　4,“因?yàn)槲易蠲靼拙庉嫷耐纯啵ё治铱偪蠟樗s寫(xiě)”即“出于對(duì)編輯的同情，我…”譯為T(mén)hey know that I, out of compassion for editors, will never decline to dash off an article of two to three thousand words.其中dash off 意為“匆匆把…寫(xiě)好，匆匆完成”

　　我是無(wú)論如何脫離不了我的書(shū)齋的了。但是除非在我讀書(shū)或是寫(xiě)文章到了出神的時(shí)候，我總會(huì)感覺(jué)到這幾間書(shū)齋沒(méi)有一間是舒服的。我理想的書(shū)齋是一個(gè)極大的房間，里面要能容下二十個(gè)書(shū)架，冬天有熱水汀;夏天有冷氣。我希望有一只最大的書(shū)桌，上面可以盡我把書(shū)籍紙張亂堆，中間還可以留一些地方安置筆硯稿紙之類(lèi)。這個(gè)當(dāng)然是我的奢望：我既沒(méi)有財(cái)力去得到那樣大的書(shū)齋，我也沒(méi)有才力去寫(xiě)出什么大文章來(lái)，不過(guò)希望也是一種安慰，同時(shí)還是一種鼓勵(lì)。

　　At any rate, I’m inseparable from my library. But none of my three studies makes me feel comfortable except when I’m completely absorbed in reading or writing. My ideal study should be roomy enough for holding twenty bookcases and have air-conditioning. And there should be a large desk there with enough space for books and writing paper to be jumbled up in piles on either side and for writing brush, inkstone, writing paper and so on to be placed in the middle. This is of course nothing but my wishful thinking. I have neither money to own such a roomy study, nor talent for creating masterpieces. Nevertheless, the extravagant hope brings me consolation all the same. It’s sort of encouragement too.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，“無(wú)論如何”有多種譯法，如：in any case; anyhow; as it may; at all events; at any rate; by all possible means; by hook or by crook; however it may be; on all accounts; on every account; under all circumstances; under [in] any circumstances; whatever happens，等，可根據(jù)語(yǔ)境選擇不同的表達(dá)

　　2，“讀書(shū)或是寫(xiě)文章到了出神的時(shí)候”譯為I’m completely absorbed in reading or writing.

　　但是，無(wú)論如何，我白天是寫(xiě)不出文章的。“樓上書(shū)房”的光線太大，多待了會(huì)頭痛，用了太厚的窗幃又會(huì)悶氣。“樓下書(shū)房”事實(shí)上又是會(huì)客間，我的客人又多，文章寫(xiě)到一半，來(lái)了幾個(gè)朋友，反而大家不舒服。我寫(xiě)文章還有一個(gè)壞習(xí)慣，和吃飯一樣不能停，一停了就吃不下;有一次寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于現(xiàn)代詩(shī)的文章，中間來(lái) 了一個(gè)朋友，到現(xiàn)在還沒(méi)有把它續(xù)完。

　　But, anyway I can’t work efficiently in the daytime. The “Upstairs Study” is too much lit up by the sun, so that I get a headache after staying there a bit too long. And a thick window curtain would only make the room stuffy. The “Downstairs Study” is in fact a drawing room-cum-study. I have frequent visitors. When they call, I have to break off writing to the discomfort of both parties. I’m in the bad habit of finishing my article at one go like when I eat a meal. Once interrupted, I just can’t resume eating. Once, while writing an article on modern poetry, I was interrupted by a friend visiting. As a result, the article remains unfinished even today.

　　要點(diǎn)：

　　1，“我白天是寫(xiě)不出文章的”這里又是一個(gè)“寫(xiě)不出文章”，此處宜理解為“不能有效工作”譯為I can’t work efficiently in the daytime

　　2，“光線太大”即“光照過(guò)于充足”譯為be too much lit up by the sun

　　3，“‘樓下書(shū)房’事實(shí)上又是會(huì)客間”即“樓下書(shū)房既是會(huì)客間又是書(shū)房”譯為T(mén)he “Downstairs Study” is in fact a drawing room-cum-study.其中cum是介詞，一般用以構(gòu)成復(fù)合詞，作“兼作”解。

　　4，“我的客人又多”譯為I have frequent visitors，絡(luò)繹不絕的客人。

　　5，“反而大家不舒服”譯為to the discomfort of both parties.其中to 表示”導(dǎo)致，致使”,表示引起某種后果，在《養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣》中也有類(lèi)似表達(dá)~即“大聲講話，擾及他人的寧?kù)o，是一種不好的習(xí)慣”譯為It is a bad habit to talk loudly to the disturbance of others.出現(xiàn)兩次的表達(dá)一定是可以積累的干貨!

　　6，at one go意為“一口氣，一舉，一下”如：Modernization of a vast country like China cannot be done at one go.

　　(在中國(guó)這樣一個(gè)幅員廣大的國(guó)家里,要實(shí)現(xiàn)四個(gè)現(xiàn)代化,不可能一蹴而就.)

　　所以假使有什么副刊編輯要我寫(xiě)那種分期登載的長(zhǎng)篇小說(shuō)，他一定會(huì)受累。但是夜里寫(xiě)文章，一忽便會(huì)天亮;一天不睡，三天都不能使精神恢復(fù)，我于是時(shí)常頭痛。去找醫(yī)生，他們總是皺緊了眉頭嘆口氣。“三層樓書(shū)房”現(xiàn)在已放了一個(gè)床，我的表弟睡在里面，所以我除了尋書(shū)便不常去了。

　　Therefore, a newspaper editor would inevitably end up in trouble if he should entrust me with the job of writing a serialized novel for his supplement. But, when I write at night, the day seems to break sooner than I think. And one sleepless night will make me feel tired for three days on end and often suffer from a headache. When I go to see a doctor, he will just sigh with a frown. As to the “Third-floor Study”, a bed has now been placed there for my younger male cousin. So I seldom go there unless when I need a book.

　　1，“分期登載的長(zhǎng)篇小說(shuō)”可以為a serial novel,或 a novel to appear in instalmemts, a novel to be pubished in serial form

　　2,“他一定會(huì)受累”這里的“受累”并不是指“勞累”而是“陷入麻煩”，因此譯為end up in trouble

　　3，“但是夜里寫(xiě)文章，一忽便會(huì)天亮”意為“在夜里寫(xiě)作，總會(huì)覺(jué)得天亮得特別早”或“總覺(jué)得不一會(huì)兒天就亮了”譯為But, when I write at night, the day seems to break sooner than I think

　　事實(shí)上，我已不應(yīng)當(dāng)對(duì)我的書(shū)齋發(fā)什么牢騷，雖然不大，可是究竟容得下我。況且他們也不算對(duì)不起我，自從去年秋天搬到此地，真名假名的文章，將近十五萬(wàn)字了。

　　In fact, I shouldn’t have complaints about my studies. Small as they are, they are tolerable. Since I moved to the present lodgings in the autumn of last year, I’ve produced writings, under my real name or a pseudonym, totaling about 150,000 words.

　　要點(diǎn)：“雖然不大，可是究竟容得下我。況且他們也不算對(duì)不起我…”中， “容得下我”即“能容忍我”，“不算對(duì)不起我”即“能滿足我的基本需求” ，意思有所重疊，譯文中采用意譯法處理，把后兩句合二為一，只取一個(gè)意思，譯為Small as they are, they are tolerable.此句也可譯為，Though small ,they serve my purpose fairly well.

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